A little bit of writing from a chatterbox working mum
I really love this peice, poems can be what every you want them to be and this is pretty powerful
Wow this is really good Lorraine. There are a few of us with the same idea this week x
I simply do not know what you're talking about!That is a wonderful poem, beautifully written.
This is wonderful. So simple x
Great stuff! It has a rhythm like a clock too which I think is clever.Well done for being brave. Lovely poem :)
That's lovely. Well done.
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I really struggle with poetry, not something I do but this just sort of popped into my head when I was reading the prompts.
That can happen from time to time, even for non-poets: the trick is to capture the inspiration, which you've done really well here. Don't close your mind to poetry!
Time is my mortal enemy. Beautiful poem. Claire x p.s. I know what you mean about having to write and post before you change your mind! x